swara AIPPG Senior Member
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Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 3:14 am Post subject: can someone correct my essay plz? |
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Governments should spend more money on education than recreation and sports.Do you agree or disagree?
Education is the most important element of today's life.There are two types of subjects in education: academic subjects and nonacademic subjects.Some people think that government should spend more money on academic subjects rather than nonacademic subjects.However,some believe that rounded education is important for children.Therefore money should spend on education as well as on recreation and sports.Both points of view will be discussed in this order.
It is believed by some people that academic subjects are more importnat than nonacademic.Most of the parents think that children should concentrate more on studies which will help them to build better career and to achieve success in the life.Studies help to get better knowledge and skill which is very essential in this competitive world.Moreover,some people think that if children spend more time on recreation and sports,then they will show more interests for sports rather than studies.After analyzing these facts,it is clear that why many people support this claim.
On the other hand,many people argue that rounded education is very important for children.Hence,government should spend money on education and on other extracurricular activities.Children should be healthy mentally and physically.Non academic subjects like sports,dance ,music and some recreational activities help them to keep fit,healthy and active all the time.
In addition,Many children can make their career in sports,music or dance.Some students will be good in studies and some in other activities.Parents and teachers should encourage their talent and should give opportunity to develop that talent.
To sum up,after analyzing both points of view it is obvious that education is the most imprtant part of our life.Children should learn both academic and non acaademic subjects because rounded education help children to develop better personality.Therefore,government should spend money on education as well as on recreation and sports.
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