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Nowadays a huge amounts of advertisement aimed at children. Some people think that it endangers children and should be banned.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?



Advertisements are the one of the most important and essential advancement of todays technology.Nowadays there are huge numbers of advertisement and it is undeniable that,advertisement aimed mainly at children.Some people think that it pose threat to children.Therefore,advertisement should be banned.On the other hand,some believe that ,it doesnot endangers children.These points of view will be discussed in this order.

It is believed by some people that huge amount of advertisement aimed at children which can be dangerous to children and it should be banned.Nowadays there are advertisements which creates many questions in children's mind.For instance,condoms advertisements.Sometimes it is difficult to explain about some things...Although,it is important to explain about condoms because these days AIDS is very common in young generation.Children should understand some particular things in particular age groups.

In addition,there are some advertisements which will make bad impact on children..For example,alcohol,cigarette,Tobacco and soft drinks like coco cola ,pepsi.These things can spoil children's health and life.Children can also acquire some other bad habits like drugs.Therefore, such advertisements should be banned to save children's life. Thus it is clear why some people gravitate towards this point of view.

However,many argue that advertisements are not dangerous or harmful to children.Advertisements are educational.In other words,they promote many new products,new discoveries which give new formation about technology and about new things.Children should be aware of new products which are very much essential in every day life.These days advertisements mainly aimed at children because companys if they attract children then parents automaticaly will follow their children .Such as,Mcdonalds.Children like it so much that parents have to take them when ever they want to go.So Mcdonalds will be always full of families.Hence,advertisements are not dangerous to children.

In nut shell,after analyzing both points of view it is clear that there are both advantages and disadvantages of advertisements.Even though,there are many benefits,some advertisements should be banned by government like cigarette,Tobacco and soft drinks.Advertisements should promote products but should not spoil children's life.