I am planning to appliy for IELTS exan for australia immigration, would request if you can go thru the essay that i have narrated below and help me understand my gradding and area of opportunity.
The topic that i have choosen is What should a government do for a country to become successful?
Thank you in advance
[b]What should a government do for a country to become successful?[/b]
There are various factors which a good government should focus on such as macro economics, Infrastructure, balance of trade, good relation with neighbor countries, technological advancement in Information Technology and Know how in Defense sector.
I would like to give brief comment on the points mentioned above, from Macro Economics prospective itís very important to ensure the employment rate is up to the mark and major part of the population is able to achieve the minimum education require which helps to create jobs and demand in the economy, healthy and constant increase in the growth rate and GDP of the economy and proper balance between rich and middle class population, itís also imperative for both developed as well as developing country's government to focus on Infrastructure development to achieve economic as well as constant improvement in the living of their people, Infrastructure development helps to create employment opportunity in the economy.
Also, to ensure well planned foreign policyís to boost import of countryís scared resources and maximum export of dominant product to have healthy balance of trade and fiscal deposit, No matter how good the government is in terms of development its also important to have good relationship with neighbor countries as well super powers of the world to ensure support during crisis or war type situation
As no body can predict what the future has in store makes it imperative for good government to focus on technological development in Information Technology for better communication and space technology also focus on the Know how in defense sector to place the country in better position not only during the time of crisis type situation but also to showcase itís power and strength, it indeed helps to develop good perception around the world.
To conclude in brief a good government should focus on economical, social and ensure the nations priority as first then the individual goals which indeed helps to develop trust amongst the citizen and government